Does it power on at all? Can you see the backlight come on?
You definitely want to twist the ends of your wires before soldering them down, the end looks pretty frayed and if a strand of the red wire comes in contact with the black wire it's bad news.
The pads where you soldered those wires to look like they have a lot of solder on them too, to the point where I can't tell if they are touching -- probably should double check that they are not.